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Re: The Werewolf's Bite Chpt 1
Okay...the only thing that i can say is great job! Again, you have me under your spell. You did have a few typos though. A question is what I have ...
Oct 6, 2008 -
Re: Teenage love
Okay...this was to short to be a lyric. I think that you should post it in the poem section and also take out the free style because a bunch of ...
Oct 6, 2008 -
Re: I tried to write a poem....
It had a very good flow to it! I like the way that you say that you cannot write a ppoem but everything you say is one! I thought that ...
Oct 6, 2008 -
Re: Choices
Okay....ummm it had a nice flow to it I guess. You do need to edit it more though. Also the fact that it was basically something that happens a lot ...
Oct 6, 2008 -
Re: The music
This is pretty good :D I like the way that you tried to make us hear the "music". Also it was very interesting. The way that you made it almost ...
Oct 6, 2008 -
Re: I cant answer.
You had a lot of typos. You need to read over it and correct them. Also, as said by the user above me, You really should take out in the ...
Oct 5, 2008 -
Re: Deep Love
I liked it! It was good, but it should be in the poetry section because it doesn't really have a chorus or bridge. It just has verses! But I do ...
Oct 5, 2008 -
Re: The Werewolf's Bite
WOW! I AM NOW UNDER YOUR SPELL! You HAVE to add more to this! I absolutely loved it! I really love the way the young man transformed from a beast ...
Oct 5, 2008 -
Re: He's gay now.
This poem is odd.....I don't know why. I guess it is because it is talking about homosexuality....why do people say that? The title says gay so why don't we? Anyway ...
Oct 5, 2008 -
Re: Surrender.
It blasted all her hurt, and her heartache, She stopped helping herself, wishing someone else did, And turned the volume up, her sorrow awake, Tears filling the brim of her ...
Oct 5, 2008 -
Re: My Romance with the Sky
I like it! I think it was very good! I didn't see anything wrong with it at all! When I was just a boy I had a vague dream To ...
Oct 5, 2008 -
Re: The murderous suicide
this poem is creepy but, like the user above said, it has something realistic about it! fallsforyoueasily Posted: Thu Sep 25, 2008 3:56 am Post subject: -----------------------------------------------
Oct 4, 2008 -
Re: Streetwise
Okay :shock: The beginning is desturbing because it kind of confuses me but as I got deeper into the poem I realized that it made sense! I think it was ...
Oct 4, 2008 -
Re: Blood art
Very weird, but it caught my attention! How in the world do you just come up with stuff like that? You must have a amazing imagination! This was very good! ...
Oct 4, 2008 -
Re: My Angel, I was always yours
aww!This is so sad! I didn't really see anything wrong with it! It is really good! It made me cry! :cry: So sad! I love it!I love it! I love ...
Oct 4, 2008